Is this paragraph correct please?
I would like to call you in order to ask few questions regarding the e-mail that I received yesterday from the Human Resources Specialist .
Please, when it would be convenient for you?
Thanks in advance.
Last edited by verite1987; 19-Dec-2010 at 00:12.
Dear [RECEIVER'S NAME],
I would like to discuss with you regarding the E-mail which was sent to me by the 'Human Resources Specialist' yesterday; my preference goes to have a phone conversation.
I will appreciate it indeed if you let me know that according to your convenience, when we can discuss about it.
Best regards / [YOURNAME].
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.