Please check my equest letter to Police Department, due tomorrow morning

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Peecoro

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Can anyone please check following my request to Police Department ?
I need to send this request as the official letter from company where I work.

Dear, Sir or Madam.

Thank you very much for reading our request.

My name is Yuji Tokiwa, production coordinator,
with Idea Network, Japanese TV production company
in Los Angeles.

Currently, we are working on a documentary TV program
featuring about works of police officers and deputies in
Los Angeles county area. The TV show will be on aired
in Japan.

For this matter, we would like to go for ride-along with
Los Angeles Police Department.

In addition, we would like to know the information about
five highly rate crimes occurring in a day in Los Angeles.


The filming date:

If possible, we would like to have filming above matters
between January 4th and 8th in 2011.
If it doesn't work for you end, please tell us when will be
the best on January.


Please provide us your response at your earliest
convenient time to discuss further details.


Thank you very much for your consideration.
We are looking forward to hear from you soon.


Sincerely,
 
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riquecohen

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Can anyone please check following my request to Police Department ?
I need to send this request as the official letter from company where I work.

Dear, Sir or Madam.

[STRIKE]
Thank you very much for reading our request.
[/STRIKE]
My name is Yuji Tokiwa, production coordinator with Idea Network, a Japanese TV production company
in Los Angeles.

Currently, we are working on a documentary TV program
[STRIKE]featuring [/STRIKE]about the work[STRIKE]s [/STRIKE]of police officers and deputies in the
Los Angeles county area which will be [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] aired
in Japan.

For this documentary[STRIKE] matter[/STRIKE], we would like to [STRIKE]go for ride-along [/STRIKE] accompany[STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] on-duty members of the
Los Angeles Police Department.

In addition, we would like to [STRIKE]know the [/STRIKE]receive information about the
five [STRIKE]highly rate [/STRIKE] most common crimes [STRIKE]occurring in a[/STRIKE] committed each day in Los Angeles.


[STRIKE]
The filming dates
[/STRIKE]
If possible, we would like to [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]filming above matters [/STRIKE] film
between January 4th and 8th, [STRIKE]in [/STRIKE]2011.
[STRIKE]
If it doesn't work for you end, please tell us when will be
the best on January.
[/STRIKE]

Please provide us with your response at your earliest
convenient time; if you have any questions, we will be happy to provide further details.


Thank you very much for your consideration.
We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.


Sincerely,
:)
 

Peecoro

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Thank you very much !
I really appreciate your help.

Best,
 
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