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    gagagugu is offline Newbie
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    Default Anyone can help me check this paragraph?

    I just write an article called "Travelling to the Paradisaical Lijiang".

    The first paragraph is like this: There’s a popular saying spreading around Lijiang: ”The sun will still sink without pushing, time will still go by without delay. Just lead a life as if you walked together with a snail, there is no more panic.” I think many people like me have a Lijiang dream.

    Would someone like to help me check this paragraph? I want it to be native.

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    Default Re: Anyone can help me check this paragraph?

    Hi,

    I'm not clear what you're asking. Are you wanting the ideas in the paragraph to be written using the sort of phraseology you'd find in say the UK or US?

    Regards

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    Smile Re: Anyone can help me check this paragraph?

    Yes, Actually it's orignially an old saying in Chinese. So I suppose there is kind of similar English idiom or old saying in English. If there is so, I would like to know. Thanks for your patient check and great help.

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