Very good writing! I wish I could see your rooms! Here are some suggestions:
Well I dont have my personal Drawing room
Well, I donít have a personal drawing room.
I share my room with my brother
I share my room with my brother.
and I am very lucky to do it because due to live together we are close to each other also.
I am very lucky to share a room because due to living together, we are close to each other also.
Well lets talk about things I have in my room,
Well, let's talk about the things I have in my room.
There is A T.V.
There are computers
There are computers.
we are luckily have more than one computer in our room.
We are lucky to have more than one computer in our room.
(OR, Luckily we have more...)
There are so many books related from every part of life.
There are so many books, relating to every part of life.
There is printed carpet.
There are show pieces in show case.
There are show pieces in showcase.
Unfortunately we both dont eager to put scenery in our room.
Unfortunately, we are not eager to put scenery in our room.
(OR, both of us are not eager to....)
There are chairs.
luckily we have more then one chair in our room because we have more than one computer
Luckily, we have more then one chair in our room because we have more than one computer.
so sometimes we both use computer sametime so we badly need more than one chair.
So sometimes we both use a computer at the same time so we badly need more than one chair.
There is papers for writting purpose.
There are papers for writing.
There is AC in our room, so from the grace of My dear Almighty Allah we have all facilities in our room except major things. such as refrigerator or etc.
There is AC in our room, so with the grace of My dear Almighty Allah we have all the facilities in our room except for major things, such as a refrigerator, etc.
(You live life WITH the grace of Allah, or the grace that COMES FROM Allah)
Now i am talking about my TV Launch .
Now I am talking about my TV Launch (Launch? TV Room?)
Our TV launch has got TV it is understood.
Our TV room has got a TV, of course.
(OR It is understood that our TV room has a TV)
It has got TV case (table where TV is located i dont know how we say in english ).
It has a TV table. (I donít think there is a better word for that.)
(OR The TV sits on a TV table.)
(With all of these sentences, IT HAS GOT should be IT HAS.. HAS GOT is poor English, but many people use it. GOT means recieved.. I GOT a letter in the mail, I GOT a good grade in English.
It has got Sofa's set with table.
It has a sofa set (more than one sofa, right? Or a sofa with a chair, right?) with a table.
It has got dinner table also.
It has a dinner table also.
It has got thick self print carpet.
It has a thick self-print carpet.
It has got fan as well as energy savers.
It has a...
It has AN emergency light system.
sometimes electricity failure occur in our area then it help us alot.
Sometimes electricity failures occur in our area, then it helps us a lot.
It has got artificial fruit which is situated on the dinner table.
It has artificial fruit which is situated on the dinner table.
It has one telephone.
It has A refrigerator.
It has AN ashtray.
It has windows as well.
It has got beautiful sceneries.
It has beautiful scenery outside the windows.
(There is no such thing as more than one scenery.)
(OR It has a beautiful VIEW.)
There are so many things which is needed by any TV launch.
There are so many things which are needed by any TV room.
So by the grace of our Almighty Allah we have all kind of things which help us to live easily.
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