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    Smile Motivation letter to University

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    Default Re: Motivation letter to University

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to your university in the 2011 autumn term.

    First of all I would like to present some background about myself. My name is Darja and I am currently living in Estonia. At the moment I am in high school. Since my early years the question of my future university studies and a profession has been very important to me. I have a great desire to study abroad and I dream of being accepted to the European University with its innovative teaching approach and high international standards.

    I find that I learn much from my summer jobs. This work experience has expanded my view on a whole service system. During the summer of 2010, while working in restaurant, I gained a great deal of practical experience in the field of hospitality. I got very interested in how to manage in this sector. I want to be involved in the international tourism industry. Now when I am thinking about my future career I see myself in a position which is related to Hospitality, Service and Tourism Management.

    At the moment I am a member of a student council in high school. Also I was active in all performances organised by my school. This experience allowed me to develop and use organizational skills that no doubt will help me in my future career.

    I think that studying in your university will be an excellent platform for my future career. It gives a lot of opportunities like learning languages, widening my horizons, getting to know other cultures, and learning in a different way than I used to.

    Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to your positive response.

    Yours sincerely,
    Darja
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    Thank you Rover!

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    Default Re: Motivation letter to University

    Quote Originally Posted by DaryLeto View Post
    Hello!
    I'm now in a last year of high school and preparing some documents for university that i want to apply after my graduation. Motivation letter is required for applying and I need some help because I never wrote such thing before. I would be thankful if somebody help me to make it acceptable.

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to your university to for the 2011 autumn term.

    First of all, I would like to present some background information about myself. My name is Darja and (your name is not necessary in the body of the letter) I am currently living in Estonia. At the moment I am in high school. Since my early years, the question of my future university studies and a profession were very important to me. I have a great desire to study abroad and I dream to be accepted to thea European university with its innovative teaching approach and high international standards.

    I find that I learnhave learned much from my summer jobs. This work experience has expanded my view on a wholecomplete service system. During the summer of 2010, while working in a restaurant, I gained a great deal of practical experience in the field of hospitality. I got very interested in how to manage in this business sector. I want to be involved in the international tourism industry. Now, when I am thinking about my future career, I see myself in a position which is related to Hospitality, Service and Tourism Management (caps are really not necessary).

    At the moment, I am a member of a student council in high school. Also, I was active in all performancesactivities organised by my school. This allowshas allowed and will allow me to develop and use organizational skills that no doubt will help me in my future career.

    I think that studying in your university will be an excellent platformfoundation for my future career. It givesprovides a lot of opportunities like learning languages, widening my horizon, getting to know other cultures and learning in a different way than I have been used to.

    Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to your positive response.

    Yours sincerely,
    Darja
    Nice work. A few suggestions.

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