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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Which sentence is correct? Thanks

    Please find attached our company gathering photos on 21 Dec 2010.

    Please find attached photos for our company gathering on 21 Dec 2010.

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    Re: Which sentence is correct? Thanks

    Hi Zoe

    No. 2 works better for me.

    With No. 1, it's not clear as to whether the gathering or attaching took place on 21 Dec 2010.

    Hope this helps
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