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  1. RoseSpring's Avatar
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    #1

    Share the burden!

    Is this sentence correct?

    I'll be relieved my son if you share the burden ( of this family) with me.

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    #2

    Re: Share the burden!

    Quote Originally Posted by RoseSpring View Post
    Is this sentence correct?

    I'll be relieved, my son, if you share the burden ( of this family) with me.
    Yes, with the commas.

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    #3

    Re: Share the burden!

    Quote Originally Posted by RoseSpring View Post
    Is this sentence correct?

    I'll be relieved, my son, if you share the burden ( of this family) with me.
    Hi Rose,

    In my opinion, it is now 100% correct

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