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    rahuldhoble is offline Junior Member
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    Please suggest my whether this is true sentence or not :

    1) I am asking this question to my boss that whether I do the task requested by client or not .. Please correct me if i wrong.
    "Do I update the excel sheet as per client mail ?"

    2) I need to send mail to my boss regarding my one of team member that he is not in office today.
    "Hello sir , Pattric is not in office today because his brother is admitted in hospital at morning. and Pattric need to reach there for take care his brother."

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    Re: Grammer Mistake

    ***I am not a teacher***

    Quote Originally Posted by rahuldhoble View Post
    Please suggest my whether this is true sentence or not :

    1) I am asking this question to my boss that whether I do the task requested by client or not .. Please correct me if i wrong.
    "Do I update the excel sheet as per client mail ?"
    I would probably word this as:
    "Should I update the Excel sheet as per the client's letter?"


    2) I need to send mail to my boss regarding my one of team member that he is not in office today.
    "Hello sir , Pattric is not in office today because his brother is admitted in hospital at morning. and Pattric need to reach there for take care his brother."
    and this one, I would probably write as follows (assuming you address your boss as 'Sir'):
    "Dear Sir, Pattric is not in the office today as his brother was admitted to hospital this morning, and Pattric needs to visit the hospital to take care of him."

    Hope this helps.

    Ade

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