Everybody loves holidays because during our holidays we can relax and have fun.I strongly believe that all students and teaching staff are looking for winter holiday because it is a break for
weus all. We can have more free time to do what we want during this period of time. We can sleep and stay up as long as we want to and donít need to worry about getting up late for class the next day morningfor the next day morning classes.
I had always dreamed about going to France and last winter holiday my dream came true.
It was the evening of December 19, when my parents told me that we are going to France for one week in our holiday. I couldnít believe my ears what I just heard. I asked they again if is not making it up, but they said
theywe have already purchased tickets online and made plans. On 21th21st May we departed Berlin and headed towards our first destination, Mont Blanc mountenmountain(i guess u wrote mountain). As soon as we reached there after a long journey, I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures. I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes. We stayed in the 5-star hotel near the moutainmountain. Next day we hired a helicopter for a trip to see the sorroundssurrounds. It was simply amazing.Last day was fantastic too because Iíve driveddrove (use the second form of drive in past tense) a snowmobile and it was really fun.
My holiday was exciting and full of joy. I enjoyed it immensely. I am looking forward to
going there again soon. again visit those places soon.
Can you correct this narative ?
Okay i have corrected ur mistakes.. u have to work on ur spell mistakes and ur sentence are bit jumbled up so try to make it clear, u should place the words in sequence in the sentences that will make more sense, I hope i have helped u GOOD Luck and keep practising.
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