1. Make a sales letter. As a sales manager of a computer accessories company, sell the latest USB flash drive to student organization presidents of a university. Cite important features of the USB that the students will find very useful.
Here is my work
What if I tell you that some important files from your USB are stolen? You are at school dealing with computer work especially doing proposals in improving your University, doing your thesis related documents, programming a 2000 line code in a notepad, encoding an important speech for elections and many more. You take your usual 1 hour break by eating snacks at the canteen and leaving your things behind in your school’s library especially your important documents stored in a flash drive.
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Please correct the above for any errors
I also need information on the following
1. What are the line spacing in every paragraph? (My book uses 2 spaces per paragraph)
2. Is it okay if i could indent the top and bottom part by 0.8 inches? (w/c i am currently using because page 1 doesn't fit)
3. Is my spacing below Yours truly, correct?
4. Please correct the above for any grammatical errors
5. Any other necessary corrections?
6. Do i need to add a letter heading above the Dear in a sales letter? (address of our company)
usually everytime i pass a letter i always get marked the wrong format
I know a letter is font 12 and times new roman but is there an ultimate format used commonly in business writing>?
Last edited by EnglishEngineer; 22-Jan-2011 at 18:20.