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    Smile is this sentence correct?

    Hi everyone! Can I use "holding" like this in the following sentence?

    I would like to seek a position in the following Eru Logistics training that the American Red Cross will be holding on October 7th, 2011.

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    Last edited by indonica; 24-Jan-2011 at 09:23.

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    Re: is this sentence correct?

    ***Not a teacher***

    Quote Originally Posted by indonica View Post
    I would like to seek a position in the following Eru Logistics training that the American Red Cross will be holding on October 7th, 2011.
    This looks fine to me apart from the use of 'following'. I think it is more likely you mean 'approaching' or 'next' (but can't say for sure without more detail on the context). I also don't know what 'Eru Logistics training' is, and wonder whether it should be 'ERU Logistics training course' or something like that?

    Hope this helps

    Ade
    Last edited by azcl; 25-Jan-2011 at 00:26. Reason: Substituted 'course' for 'event'

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