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    Hello,

    Could you please correct these sentences?

    1.There was a mechanism that let her(the doll) move.
    2.Her vocabulary was more than enough(again about the doll)
    3.She is so lovely and seems to be alive/real.
    4.It was treated like a friend/a human being.
    5.She decided to take it with them on their honeymoon.
    6.She began to feel unwell.
    7.She found the front door wide open.
    8.The funeral was arranged(for?) yesterday.
    9.He couldn't makeup his mind what to give his wife Emma for their wedding he didn't want to repeat himself, but nothing came into his mind.




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    Default Re: My sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by sondra View Post
    Hello,

    Could you please correct these sentences?

    1.There was a mechanism that let her(the doll) move.
    2.Her vocabulary was more than enough(again about the doll)
    3.She is so lovely and seems to be alive/real.
    4.It was treated like a friend/a human being.
    5.She decided to take it with them on their honeymoon.
    6.She began to feel unwell.
    7.She found the front door wide open.
    8.The funeral was arranged(for?) yesterday.
    Yes, either, but they mean a different thing. The funeral could have been held yesterday, or it could have been arranged yesterday to be held tomorrow.
    9.He couldn't makeup his mind what to give his wife Emma for their wedding. He didn't want to repeat himself, but nothing came into his mind.



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