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    oves is offline Newbie
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    Default switchgear

    Dear teachears,
    can you please proofread the writing below and tell if I made any mistake?

    We're in the process of switching over from P8 1.9 to P8 2.00. Because of that transitiona few minor graphical changes in the drawings of your Demo Panels were made. All the devices and functions remain the same as before.
    I thought maybe I don‘t have to bother since the functions and devices are the same but I didn’t want to make those changes without you being aware of it.The final version is enclosed below.
    The drawings and sheets of devices for the low voltage compartments have been already handed over to a workroom.
    We are all set to start production of the low voltage compartments for your Demo panels.

    Thank you
    Last edited by oves; 26-Jan-2011 at 09:05.

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    ***Not a teacher***

    Hello Oves,

    There are a few things that I would write differently, but some of this is just personal preference and other posters would no doubt provide different wording in many cases.

    Quote Originally Posted by oves View Post
    Dear teachears,
    can you please proofread the writing below and tell if I made any mistake?

    We're We are in the process of switching over from P8 1.9 to P8 2.00.

    Because of that this transition, a few minor graphical changes have been made in to the drawings of your Demo Panels were made.



    All the devices and functions remain the same as before.
    I thought maybe I don‘t have to bother since the functions and devices are the same but I didn’t want to make those changes without you being aware of it.
    Please be aware that although some minor graphical modifications have been made, there have been no changes to devices or functionality.

    The final version is enclosed below.
    The drawings and sheets of devices for the low voltage compartments have been already been handed over to a workroom, and we are therefore ready to begin production of these.

    We are all setto start production of the low voltage compartments for your Demo panels.

    Thank you

    Ade

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    Default Re: switchgear

    Thank you azcl. Your correction really helped me.

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