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    MAJSH is offline Junior Member
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    Default Kindly help me to correct these sentences

    As we discussed over the phone, I have sent you the internet banking application on [date], but to vain I haven't received any response from your end.
     
    Please ensure that my online banking application is accepted and active my online banking service soon as possible.

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    Rover_KE is offline Moderator
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    Default Re: Kindly help me to correct these sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by MAJSH View Post
    As we discussed over the phone, I have sent you the internet banking application on [date], but so far I haven't received any response from your end.
     
    Please ensure that my online banking application is accepted and activate my online banking service soon as possible.
    Rover

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