Thanks a lot Gillnetter. Your comments/suggestions are really helpful; I especially liked the part where you have commented on the matter rather than English.
Here are my responses to your comments:
1. Moral conducts are like good behavior, manners, good things in life based on teacher's experience.
2. Action items are like future tasks, coarse of action for the student..
3. Teacher have an importance with education. That's what I wanted to emphasize; without a teacher the education is incomplete. Take for example, this essay proofreading; a computer may not be able to mimic everything that you have done. A mentor/teacher is always required.
Hope I am clear. However, I agree I need to focus on my reasoning to make it more convincing.
Thanks Again. Looking for similar help in near future.
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