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    A doubt in correctness of a sentence

    Hello,

    Can anyone help me in finding out the correctness of the following sentence?
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    I believe that you have made the changes as Richie suggested as I just checked the domain 'ideas-that-work.com' and it is working fine.
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    Shouldn't it be like?

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    I believe that you have made the changes as Richie had suggested (OR we can say "As suggested by Richie" OR "as As suggested") as I have just checked the domain 'ideas-that-work.com' and it is working fine.
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    Peter

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    Re: A doubt in correctness of a sentence

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    Yours is OK, but so is the original. Simple past works in all these cases-- just so long as the chronological order is clear to the reader. What the original does need is a comma after suggested.
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    Re: A doubt in correctness of a sentence

    Hello,

    Thanks for your quick and satisfactory reply.

    Peter

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