A few suggestions.Hello everybody!! I'm a new member and I am just about to take the FCE and I have many problems with the writing part, so I would like to ask you help! Would you read this informal email and correct it please ? Thank you!
This is the task:
You recently received an email from your English-speaking friend, Pat, inviting you to stay and asking you to a special party.
It was great to hear from you. I’m so excited about spending time with you during the summer
thatand I can't wait. anymore.
July is perfect! My parents will be in Italy enjoying a second honeymoon so it’s great. I’ll have the opportunity to be there with you while they’re out of the country.
About Tim’s birthday, I’ve been thinking what kind of present I can give him, and I want your opinion so what do you think about giving him a t-shirt from my country?
By the way, sorry, but I won’t be able to go camping with you, because I am alergic (alergic to what?) and the doctors
advicehave advised me that I shouldn’t do things like that.
And finally, but no
tless important, I’d really like to know if we can go to a music concert which will beif there are any while I am there.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.