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    Exclamation please revise them,

    dear Teacher,
    please edit the question bellow:

    1.what do the main insects and disease appear on trees?
    2. Have you ever built one multiplicative garden? If not yet, do you have any intend about it?
    3. How do you design an orchard correctly?
    4. How many kinds of multiplicating are there for fruit trees? What is advantage of growing fruit trees by transplanting compare with growing by grain?

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    Re: please revise them,

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    1. What are the main insects and diseases that appear on trees?
    2. Have you ever built a multiplicative garden? If not yet, do you intend to do so? [I have no idea what a 'multiplicative garden' is.]
    3. How do you design an orchard correctly?
    4. How many kinds of propagation [?] are there for fruit trees? What is advantage of growing fruit trees by transplanting/grafting (?) over growing from seed/grafting(?)?


    I am not a horticulturalist, but I think that some of your vocabulary is awry.
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