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    Kristine May is offline Member
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    Is there something wrong with the sentence?

    She said that Celeste was acting like a queen even inside the prison cell she even hired a “bulldog”.

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    Re: Is there something wrong with the sentence?

    Quote Originally Posted by Kristine May View Post
    She said that Celeste was acting like a queen even inside the prison cell she even hired a “bulldog”.
    Yes, at the least it needs some internal punctuation

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    Re: Is there something wrong with the sentence?

    So it should be:

    She said that Celeste was acting like a queen even while inside the prison cell. She even hired a “bulldog”.

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    Re: Is there something wrong with the sentence?

    Quote Originally Posted by Kristine May View Post
    So it should be:

    She said that Celeste was acting like a queen even while inside the prison cell. She even hired a “bulldog”.
    That's much better.

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