I need some help.
I am writing to ask information at a university I am willing to apply.
can you help me correct any mistakes and I would also appreciate any comment and suggestions.
Thanks in advance
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is . I am writing to enquire information about applying at your university.
I am very interested in your university, firstly due to the facilities and advantages it offers as also as the opportunity to learn more about German culture. I would like to study Medicine as I would like to help others and make a difference, but also as I consider being a doctor one of the most rewarding jobs.
I am currently studying at the last year of ‘’ Gymnasium . Up to now my grade is 10. I have TOEFL iBT 97/120 points and also Diplome de Langue Française Niveau B2 Du Conseil de l’Europe.
I have been studying German for two years and my language level is B.1.
I am interested to know what types of procedures I need to follow and the all the necessary documentations I need in order to apply at your university.
I would be grateful for any information you can give me and I look forward to hearing from you soon.