Katue
Member
- Joined
- Nov 24, 2009
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Russian Federation
- Current Location
- Russian Federation
Hello!
My name's Kathy and I would like to apply to the US college next year. As I am a foreigner I need to get lots of information about the whole application procedure. And I need them to answer my letter so it should be perfectly correct. That's why I'm asking you to check my letter.
Here it goes.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire about applying to Antelope Valley College as an international student. I would like to ask for information about special terms and conditions of application and admission for international students. I would appreciate if you could provide me with step-by-step application procedure guide.
I would be grateful if you could also review my case. I am a Russian student at the Russian State University for the Humanities. I’m getting my Information Security bachelor’s degree next June. So I’m planning to apply to your college. Moreover, I already studied in the USA in 2008. I attended Berkeley summer session course ‘English as a second language’ and got my EST Diploma. Also I would like to let you know that I am a disabled person. I have no left hand and I usually wear an artificial limp. So I would like to know if I could apply for financial aid or social security benefits in your college.
I would appreciate any information that you could provide me with.
Sincerely,
Katherine Grebenyuk
My name's Kathy and I would like to apply to the US college next year. As I am a foreigner I need to get lots of information about the whole application procedure. And I need them to answer my letter so it should be perfectly correct. That's why I'm asking you to check my letter.
Here it goes.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire about applying to Antelope Valley College as an international student. I would like to ask for information about special terms and conditions of application and admission for international students. I would appreciate if you could provide me with step-by-step application procedure guide.
I would be grateful if you could also review my case. I am a Russian student at the Russian State University for the Humanities. I’m getting my Information Security bachelor’s degree next June. So I’m planning to apply to your college. Moreover, I already studied in the USA in 2008. I attended Berkeley summer session course ‘English as a second language’ and got my EST Diploma. Also I would like to let you know that I am a disabled person. I have no left hand and I usually wear an artificial limp. So I would like to know if I could apply for financial aid or social security benefits in your college.
I would appreciate any information that you could provide me with.
Sincerely,
Katherine Grebenyuk
