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    Question Check my letter

    I am learning english and I decided to write about something. I've found the exercise(attachment)

    Please help me to understand my faults.



    Officer for tourism
    Dear sir
    I have seen you advertisment in one of the
    British magazine, and I would like to apply this
    job.
    I am 18 years old and now finishing my school
    course. I am currently looking for a summer job
    before studying in university. I would be able to start
    work in next month untill the end of august.
    I have gained good experience during my study
    here. I am living in London for 3 year and have
    visited all museums and attractions here.
    To be honest I always interested in history,
    customs and traditions of England, especially in
    London. Also from the childhood I was interesting in
    English language and I think it will be easy to
    communicate with any tourists. It would be brilliant
    experience for me too.
    I would be grateful if you consider my
    application. I believe I would be a usefull member
    of your team.
    So, I look forward to hearing from you soon.
    Your sincerly,
    Dan



    Could you fix my mistakes, especially in grammatic? What partition of grammar I should learn? Please, It will be immense benefit for me.
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    Re: Check my letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Gillnetter View Post
    Gil
    NOT A TEACHER.

    I think you may have missed a mistake.

    "And I would like to apply FOR this job."

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    Re: Check my letter

    Thank you very much!!!
    I will analyze all mistakes necessarily.

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