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    Dear Teacher, please revise them for me, thank alots.
    best regards
    thachha


    1. Introduction

    2. group divided for practice
    3.Contingent division
    4. Group discuss follow questions bellow:
    a. Please tell the relevant matter with design orchard:
    - What is market problem?
    - How is ecological environment (cultivating area), such as climate and soil?
    -What kind of fruit trees is selected?
    b. How many steps are there in designing an orchard?
    c. What is complexion and physiology feature of some mainly fruit trees?
    d. How the models of fruit trees are arranged in the garden?
    (Notes: Trainer need to expand the discussion adequately in each area) Group discussion
    5. Each group prepare result of discussion on paper A0
    Write on paper A4
    4. relax
    Game
    6.Each group presents result of the discussion at the class
    Reporting
    7. Practising on designing orchard Field practice
    8. Trainer coordinates with trainees to summarize the subject.

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    Default Re: please revise ,

    What do you mean by 3.Contingent division?

    4. Group discuss follow questions bellow: BELOW
    a. Please tell the relevant matter with design orchard: ORCHARD DESIGN
    - What is market problem? THE MARKET PROBLEM or use the plural

    c. What is complexion and physiology feature- given that you are talking about trees in the plural, I think this should be plural too as there will be various features, won't there?
    d. How the models of fruit trees are arranged in the garden? No need for a question mark

    Write on paper A4- A4 paper

    4. relax - the numbering has gone strange, and I think you might mean Break, not Relax.
    6.Each group presents result- each group presents its results

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