Help on dialogs
AB : What are you doing, Wayne?
WAYNE : I知 eating.
AB : You are still eating? We池e already late!
WAYNE : Are you sure?
AB : Yes! I already told you, right?
WAYNE : You did? But nevermind! I知 sure they値l wait for us. Have you eaten?
AB : Yes, I have. Could you eat faster?
WAYNE : Sure!
Anything wrong with the dialog? Maybe on grammar or sentence structure?
Re: Help on dialogs
The grammar and sentence structure are good. Whether that makes it a good dialogue is another point.
Originally Posted by ediblegrammar