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    Exclamation please revise it(2 sentences)

    - In socioeconomic strategy of Vietnam, besides getting maximum national funding, the external support funding is very important. The loan funded by ADB and the grant funded from DIFD for CRLIP are significant support funding for Vietnamís poverty reduction in general and for the provinces in particular.

    - CRLIP has a huge fund size, about 1.200 billions VND, it is approximately 2/3 counterpart budget investing in the four provinces annual. Thus, we see, this is a very important project, it needs to be managed, using at right object, right subject and efficiently.

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    Default Re: please revise it(2 sentences)

    the socio-economic strategy
    CRILP has/is a hugefund
    annual- annually

    There's too much stuff here for people to look at- you are posting large amounts of highly specialised text that really requires the dedicated time of a proof-reader experienced in the area.

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