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    meurxgrl206 is offline Newbie
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    Default Can some one proof read this and fix my grammar pleasee

    Friday, March 04, 2011



    Dear Smith,
    As one of our manager talk to you on the phone earlier today about our store suspect some food stamp fraud activities going on in our store, you suggested us write a letter and explain the situation.

    We notice every first week or second week of the month, we have some customers come to our store and purchase products that we know it’s definitely not for their every use, for example: each different customer will come and buy $100 - $150 of rice or fish sauce only (in the amount that reach their food stamp limits), later on the day the same customer came back with cash purchase on items that not qualify for food stamp purchase like alcohol and cigarettes.

    We also notice some fraud activities going on in front of our store; we called the police department a few times but every time the police arrived those people are disappear.

    Again we are 100% against food stamp fraud and we’re trying to do everything to prevent this, please advise us what we need to do if the situations keep risen in our store.

    Best regards,

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    Default Re: Can some one proof read this and fix my grammar pleasee

    Mr Smith
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    Dear Smith,
    One of our managers talked to you on the phone earlier today about suspected food stamp fraud happening in our store and you suggested that we write a letter and explain the situation.


    We notice that every first or second week of the month, certain customers come into our store and purchase products that we know are definitely not for their everyday use. For example, the customer will come in and buy $100 - $150 worth of rice or fish sauce only, in the amount that reaches their food stamp limit. Later, on that same day, that customer will return to make cash purchases for items that do not qualify for food stamps, like alcohol and cigarettes.

    We also notice other suspicious activities happening in front of our store. We called the police department a few times but when the police arrive, those people disappear.

    We are totally against food stamp fraud and we’re trying to do everything to prevent it from happening in our store. Please advise us what we need to do if the situation continues on our premises.

    Sincerely,

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    Default Re: Can some one proof read this and fix my grammar pleasee

    Good answer, Susie.

    Rover

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