Please change this sentence into some sentences.

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ludwig1990

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Hello,everyone!
There is a sentence I speak,I'm sure,for the faculty of the liberal arts school and for the faculties of the specialized schools as well,when I say that a university has no real existence and no real purpose expect as it succeeds in putting you in touch,both as specialists and as humans,with those human minds your human mind needs to include.
Could you be kind enough to tell me how to change this sentence into some sentences that are simply and easy to grasp?
Many thanks!
 

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Hello,everyone!
There is a sentence I speak,I'm sure,for the faculty of the liberal arts school and for the faculties of the specialized schools as well,when I say that a university has no real existence and no real purpose expect as it succeeds in putting you in touch,both as specialists and as humans,with those human minds your human mind needs to include.
Could you be kind enough to tell me how to change this sentence into some sentences that are simply and easy to grasp?
Many thanks!

*just an assistant ESL teacher.

This is a little difficult to understand. You want to say that universities are only useful for connecting with people??

How about:
I don't believe that universities have any real purpose other than putting you in touch with specialists and other humans. I think that the faculties of liberal arts schools and specialized schools would agree.

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ludwig1990

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