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    Default Help on dialogs

    Hi,

    AB : What are you doing, Wayne?

    WAYNE : I知 eating.

    AB : You are still eating? We池e already late!

    WAYNE : Are you sure?

    AB : Yes! I already told you, right?

    WAYNE : You did? But nevermind! I知 sure they値l wait for us. Have you eaten?

    AB : Yes, I have. Could you eat faster?

    WAYNE : Sure!

    Anything wrong with the dialog? Maybe on grammar or sentence structure?

    Thank you.

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    Default Re: Help on dialogs

    Quote Originally Posted by ediblegrammar View Post
    Hi,

    AB : What are you doing, Wayne?

    WAYNE : I知 eating.

    AB : You are still eating? We池e already late!

    WAYNE : Are you sure?

    AB : Yes! I already told you, right?

    WAYNE : You did? But nevermind! I知 sure they値l wait for us. Have you eaten?

    AB : Yes, I have. Could you eat faster?

    WAYNE : Sure!

    Anything wrong with the dialog? Maybe on grammar or sentence structure?

    Thank you.
    The grammar and sentence structure are good. Whether that makes it a good dialogue is another point.

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    Default Re: Help on dialogs

    Thank you! Phew.

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    Default Re: Help on dialogs

    Never mind. Two words.

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