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    please correct my sentence,t hanks

    We will change original planned, ship 100 pcs goods this week. As some items need to rework per Ben requested

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    Re: please correct my sentence,t hanks

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We will change original planned, ship 100 pcs goods this week. As some items need to rework per Ben requested
    If I understand your message, I would revise as follows: "We wiil ship 100 pieces of your original order this week. Remaining items will be reworked per Ben's request."

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