This is the second time you have posted this today.
Please only post a question once- if you post it several times, it can be confusing with people answering in the different threads.
You may be disappinted that you did not get a speed response, but bear in mind that we are a language discussion forum and do not offer a free proofreading service. You are free to put texts up for people to look at, but there is no guarantee that they will be proofread. If it's a short text, people will usually help. Most teachers get enough marking and correction at work, so some requests may not get done.
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