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Democracy in Saudi Arabialet's ask the right question. Is the democracy applicable in Saudi Arabia? Before we start answering this question, we have some points that should be highlighted. First of all, it is known that Saudi Arabia has a lot of tribes throughout the country. Second, the people of Saudi Arabia has different culture and believes, so it has to be understood first. Third, it is recognized that if a certain political system appropriate for certain country, it does not mean that it has to be the appropriate political system for another country.
Please check the essay for me. I tried to complete it by writing thesis statement in the end of this article, but unfortunately i couldn't.