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    Default Can a teacher proof read this email for me please.

    Joe,
    Apologies for not making it into work today, however, I have briefly spoken with Neil this morning and he has told me that he will point out to you the problems we discussed yesterday. I am hopeful of making a start in this area early next week but they really do need to be resolved quickly so that we can get a move on.

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    Default Re: Can a teacher proof read this email for me please.

    Joe,

    Apologies for not making it into work today. I have briefly spoken with Neil this morning and he has told me that he will point out to you the problems we discussed yesterday. I am hopeful we can make a start in this area early next week to allow us to get to the next stage in our project.

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    Boozl

    Boozl,

    I feel the email references things from perhaps a previous email, and this makes me feel a little confused. I hope my corrections here maintain the meaning you were looking for.

    Good luck.

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