Can a teacher proof read this email for me please.

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boozl

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Joe,
Apologies for not making it into work today, however, I have briefly spoken with Neil this morning and he has told me that he will point out to you the problems we discussed yesterday. I am hopeful of making a start in this area early next week but they really do need to be resolved quickly so that we can get a move on.

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Boozl
 

EnglishRyan

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Joe,

Apologies for not making it into work today. I have briefly spoken with Neil this morning and he has told me that he will point out to you the problems we discussed yesterday. I am hopeful we can make a start in this area early next week to allow us to get to the next stage in our project.

Thanks

Boozl

Boozl,

I feel the email references things from perhaps a previous email, and this makes me feel a little confused. I hope my corrections here maintain the meaning you were looking for.

Good luck.
 
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