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    Passage correction

    Could someone help me correct any errors in the below passage.

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    2010


    Teamwork is the ability to work as a group toward a common vision, even if that vision becomes extremely blurry. Having this in their hearts, each one of them have contributed to the success of the program in this adventurous journey. The first anniversary for anything is always special and remembered very long however it was an outstanding performance throughout the following year in converting the second anniversary an even more special on, which was celebrated on the 19th Feb, 2011.
    It’s always good to have your loved ones around to witness you being appreciated and respected. This creates a great emotional bond; the winners were more contented than ever to have had an opportunity to receive the awards in front of the whole crowd and most importantly, their family member.
    The event began spot on time as it was long awaited. The chief guests were welcomed byby six gorgeous ladies, dressed in typical Kerala tradition.
    Our comperes for the day were two happening gentlemen from the Acer Communication Team – “Pacino the Evergreen Hero” and “Nadish the Man of Magic.”
    Together they created a vibe that clicked so well that the Acerians were over bound with joy.
    The event began with the cake cutting ceremony. Guess who cut the cake? Our pioneers who helped us reach this height of success – Pillars from the “Wave 1.”
    This was followed by several dances performed by our outstanding Acerians! A moment for pride was when we viewed the video that displayed our ethics, values and work culture. The team had a grand banquet at the Roof Top Restaurant, which brought the crowd back on their feet.
    Post lunch, there were skits, magic show and award giving ceremony kept the show going on. The program closed with the DJ Party. The music started and suddenly the adrenalin glands evoked in all and not even a single soul in the room could help not dancing.
    The best part was when the Acer Top bosses Vivek (OM) and Kumar (GM) couldn’t refuse to go along with the crowd anymore and joined with them in the stage dance.
    It was a surprise that even the most silent Acerians forgot themselves and danced to the tunes. It was quite evident that the entire crowd had kept away all their worries and pressures and enjoyed to the core.
    Team Acer – Wish you all the best and success for your future!

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    Re: Passage correction

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