I am not a teacher, but I am happy to look over your essay and attempt to correct some of your errors. By the way, [sp] means you have misspelled a word.
task: [Capitalize all headings]
traffic [Capitalize]jams are now a major problem in most cities.However ,it seems that people are not
givegiving up their cars and use[using] other forms of transport.discuss [cap] the reasons for these two situations [this is one situation, not two] and suggest how the situaion[it] might be improved or resolved.
Traffic jams are a chronic major problem
s[note: traffic jams cause many problems, but traffic jams in general are one problem] in most cities,especially in more [rapidly] developing cities relatively.Meawhile[sp], the debates about how to ease this gridlock arenever stop.Though I am not a [traffic] specialist of traffic, [I] still want to illustrate[provide] some analysis and give some pesonal[sp] sugguestions[sp].
At first[use at first when comparing how something used to be versus how it is now. In this case you could use "To begin"],The problems werecaused by thetraffic jams should be listed here.It is easy to image the[these] problems ,such as theair pollution, [wasted] time waste,more fuel cost[s], [and] evenmore accidents.However, all of those problems can't[won't] prevent most of the people from chosing[sp] cars as the[their] transport[means of transportation] when they go out.In fact,there are even more families prepar e[ing] to puchase[sp] a car in order to be more convenient[for its increase convenience]. Except for[In addition to] convenience there are other three main reason I can figure out that are freedom,private spaces,status symbol.[three other reasons for the popularity of cars are freedom, privacy, and the status of owning your own automobile.]
Driving [your] own car to go anywhere freely is apparently better than taking [the or a] bus,[new sentence]especially ,taking a crowed bus in a traffic jam.In contrast,staying in [your] own car enjoy[ing]
private[privacy] and [less crowding] is more comfortable even in the same traffic.The last[final] reason of status symbol[increased status] seems less important,but for some certain[use some or certain, not both] people,it is the most significant reason.
Then, do we have some effective
resolutions[solutions] to resovle[solve] or ease the traffic jams?In my opinion,in a[the] short-term, the traffic jams can not be resolved comletely[sp],but could be eased through advanced techonology,effective policy,[and]traffic education.The goverment should implement some feasibility policies[studies] ,operate [a] scientific traffic system, [and] study more creative and advanced facilities and transports[transportation systems].[/QUOTE]
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