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    tnas is offline Newbie
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    Default Paragraph about a norm

    Hello folks,

    I'd like to you correct my English, please. I'm writing a resume about a norm, and I'll thankfull with corrections and suggestions.

    Thanks in advance.

    <begin>
    This norm have been prepared to provide a Information Security Management System (ISMS) model. It explain how to make out, implement and operate, critic monitoring and analysis, and how to keey and improve it. This norm has a model knewledge as "Plan-Do-Check-Act" (PDCA) that is applied to make all ISMS process. It's projected to enable the align or integration between the ISMS company and system management requirements.
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    Default Re: Paragraph about a norm

    I'm not sure what a "norm" is, but I can try to correct any obvious mistakes.

    Quote Originally Posted by tnas View Post
    Hello folks,

    I'd like to you correct my English, please. I'm writing a resume about a norm, and I'll thankfull with corrections and suggestions.

    Thanks in advance.

    <begin>
    This norm have[has] been prepared to provide a Information Security Management System (ISMS) model. It explain[s] how to make out[not sure what make out means, do you mean create?], implement and operate, critic[al] monitoring and analysis, and how to keey [don't know what keey means] and improve it. This norm has a model knewledge as "Plan-Do-Check-Act" (PDCA) that is applied to make all ISMS process. [this sentence is confusing] It's projected to enable the align[ment] or integration between the ISMS company and system management requirements.
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