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    Question pls check my letter(gramer and sitiutation)

    hai
    pls check my letter because i want to send this letter to my hr manager(manager ,she is a lady)

    sir
    i would like to meet you because i have some doubts regarding our hr policy

    regards
    tintu

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    Re: pls check my letter(gramer and sitiutation)

    Quote Originally Posted by tintumon View Post
    hai
    pls check my letter because i want to send this letter to my hr manager(manager ,she is a lady)

    sir
    i would like to meet you because i have some doubts regarding our hr policy

    regards
    tintu
    I would say

    Dear Ms. Smith

    I would like to meet with you to discuss some of my questions regarding our human resources policy.

    Sincerely,

    Tintu

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    Re: pls check my letter(gramer and sitiutation)

    Quote Originally Posted by tintumon View Post
    hai
    pls check my letter because i want to send this letter to my hr manager(manager ,she is a lady)

    sir
    i would like to meet you because i have some doubts regarding our hr policy

    regards
    tintu
    Hai and pls are internet/texting speak. The first person pronoun I is normally capitalized. You'll get better answers if you make more effort to type in proper English.

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