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Application for a Marketing internship at XXX
Dear Sir or Madam,
XXX represents for me one of the most fascinating companies in the world. It owns and manages a sensational portfolio of brands that
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Being part of your company would
be my bestgive me the opportunity to apply the varied talents and knowledge I have acquired so far though my previous internships and my academic experience in Switzerland and abroad. I知 convinced that my diversified academic path is a great advantagehas been advantageous; it has allowed me to acquire in the mean timelots of practical experience s, strong theoretical knowledge and deepgood analytical skills. My Bachelor inBA Business Administration atfrom the University of Applied Sciences gave me great occasionsthe opportunity to lead lots of formative, concrete and risk-taking projects ,directly connected to the challenges facing companies today. with company痴 today challenges. Most of the time these projects were conducted in teams, theywhich allowed me to demonstrate leadership capabilities and high collaborative and negotiation skills. Then, my MasterMA in Management with a major orientationmajoring in marketing and my assistantship at HEC Geneva gave me the opportunity to considerably extend my capabilities in areas such as market research, branding, statistics, management of luxury goods, communication orand consumer behavior. During my severalvarious internships, my greatcreativity and myprofessionalism allowed me to overpassexceed expectations and to directlyimpact directly on business results. For example, during my internships at YYY, I managed to significantly increase CA and customer loyalty. At ZZZ, my initiativeinnovative thinking has beenwas highly appreciated and I havewas therefore been directly implied intoincluded in management 痴meetings and strategic decisions. [STRIKE]In parallel[/STRIKE]At the same time, my two academic experiences abroad allowed me not only to improve my fluency in English and German but also to live out myengage my intereset in other cultures multicultural interest. I知 convinced that diversity of backgrounds and cultures can significantly foster innovation, efficiency and performance. Through competitive sport and numerous extracurricular activities I developed cam capabilitiesthe capability to manage multiple tasks in parallelsimultaneously and learnt tothat only intense efforts and passion allow deliveringdelivery of the best results. I developed excellent capabilities
To validate my master at HEC Geneva, I
haveneed to makesecure an internship of at least 4 months and I would be extremely interested in being part of XXX's marketing team, in Switzerland or abroad.
Based on my experience and strong commitment to do more than is required, I知 convinced that your challenging environment will allow me to actively contribute to the success of your company.
I知 looking forward to hearing from you and, should you have any question, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration.
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