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    Song lyrics

    Please check out my song lyrics and help me with grammar and style. Any help is highly appreciated. Thank you!

    IN A GLOW

    Every time you cross my way
    I think about what I should say
    And time
    Is moving so slow

    And when you smile, I drop my eyes,
    I blame myself, I realize
    That Iím
    All in a glow.

    But, unless youíre near,
    Iím a ruined man
    How I long to stand by you again

    But youíre away, the momentís gone
    So here and now Iím all alone
    Oh no,
    Iím all in a glow.

    I was careless the other day
    Always doing well
    Now I cannot find the way
    To break your violent spell

    Iím all in a glow
    Iím all in a glow
    Iím all in a glow
    Of love

    No one ever was to melt
    The coldness of my heart
    Now that blaze I finally felt
    Is too hot for a start

    Iím all in a glow
    Iím all in a glow
    Iím all in a glow
    Of love

    Can you read the poems in my head?
    Can you hear my heartbeat?
    Can you understand that Iíve got more
    Than just a shame,
    Than just a flush upon my cheeks?

    Every time you cross my way
    I think about what I should say
    Oh no,
    Iím all in a glow

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    Re: Song lyrics

    Every time you cross my way (cross my path, come my way)
    I think about what I should say
    And time Is moving so slow (moves so slow/?)
    And when you smile, I drop my gaze,(drop your eyes and you may not be able to find them again.)
    I blame myself, I realize
    That Iím
    All in a glow.

    It's good, just cross my way and drop my eyes are a bit strange, but in songs strange things can sometimes work. Just scream it loud enough and no-one will know.

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    Re: Song lyrics

    JTRiff, thanks a lot!

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