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    Dear teacher, please help to correct my English writing. Any error in there sentences

    iiiii
    Last edited by austinle; 03-Apr-2011 at 22:19.

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    Re: Dear teacher, please help to correct my English writing. Any error in there sente

    Hello austinle,

    My corrections are as follows:

    Dear Kristina,

    How are you doing
    back over there? AllAre things going well for you? How's your job and your family?

    Kristina,
    all things comingeverything is going very smoothly for me so far. I just had a job interviewedin last week and the manager who was interviewed me hewas very interested in hiring me, especially because of my experience and also my background.

    I got hired
    at the same day that I had interviewed. Most of the managementmanagersof at thatthe company they’reare very nice. I feeling that I’m a lucky one.

    I just bought a car for
    daily means of my work; the colorit isred and black. It cost me all of my saving money savings. Now I became aam poor person.

    Hey dear, a few words for you.Sorry this letter is so short.Hopeswill haveto get a chance to meet up with you soon.

    Best wishes,
    T

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    Thank you so much,
    Austin.
    Last edited by austinle; 03-Apr-2011 at 22:21.

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    Quote Originally Posted by austinle View Post
    Thank you so muck,
    Austin.
    Much?

    You're welcome.

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    hello

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    thanks

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    sorry. thanks

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