Mayuko
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This is also a topic of writing section of TOEFL test. If you have some time, I want to ask revise.
Questiono you agree or disagree with the following statement? The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The Internet is a first communication tool ever invented by people to create common global culture with a common language. It has been an integral part of life, and we cannot even imagine a life without it. There are many effects caused by this convenient tool. On the other hand, obviously that has bad influences on people. In this essay, I suggest some positive and negative factors of using Internet.
In the first place, almost people depend on Internet for information, communication, our shopping needs, and increasingly, our entertainment. Among them, electronic communication, commonly known as email, has been required in keeping relationship between people even overseas. It is hard to find people who don’t have email addresses. Moreover, as new style of purchase, ecommerce is popular among especially young people who like shopping. What can be found on Internet is usually cheaper than what you find in retails, in addition, the delivery is very quick. It must be more convenient for people.
On the other hand, there are some bad effects on people’s life. As the importance of using Internet is becoming increased, they seem to lose a fear of showing their own privacy on Internet. Even in an interact with strangers, people may register their private information on with no precaution. Moreover, in terms of buying some goods through Internet, with willingness to research what they want to buy, they easily make an valuable credit card purchase, which would cause some troubles.
In conclusion, after the internet has come into general use in public, we can accept many benefits from this splendid tool. However, we must pay attention to the fact we are always exposed to unexpected serious problems through communicating with others or using helpful information on Internet. Even with taking enough precaution over this weak points, this technology will bring much greater humanity’s life than their imagination. (309)
Thanks.
Questiono you agree or disagree with the following statement? The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The Internet is a first communication tool ever invented by people to create common global culture with a common language. It has been an integral part of life, and we cannot even imagine a life without it. There are many effects caused by this convenient tool. On the other hand, obviously that has bad influences on people. In this essay, I suggest some positive and negative factors of using Internet.
In the first place, almost people depend on Internet for information, communication, our shopping needs, and increasingly, our entertainment. Among them, electronic communication, commonly known as email, has been required in keeping relationship between people even overseas. It is hard to find people who don’t have email addresses. Moreover, as new style of purchase, ecommerce is popular among especially young people who like shopping. What can be found on Internet is usually cheaper than what you find in retails, in addition, the delivery is very quick. It must be more convenient for people.
On the other hand, there are some bad effects on people’s life. As the importance of using Internet is becoming increased, they seem to lose a fear of showing their own privacy on Internet. Even in an interact with strangers, people may register their private information on with no precaution. Moreover, in terms of buying some goods through Internet, with willingness to research what they want to buy, they easily make an valuable credit card purchase, which would cause some troubles.
In conclusion, after the internet has come into general use in public, we can accept many benefits from this splendid tool. However, we must pay attention to the fact we are always exposed to unexpected serious problems through communicating with others or using helpful information on Internet. Even with taking enough precaution over this weak points, this technology will bring much greater humanity’s life than their imagination. (309)
Thanks.
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