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    Default [Article] Please check grammar and othe mistakes

    Hi, I would appreciate your help in proofreading of this text:

    HI-TECH SCHOOL

    How will a school of the future look like? Probably every one of us during some boring lecture
    was wandering whether people of the future will also have to sit in the classes and listen to the teachers.

    As far as developement of tehnology is concerned it seems that there will be no need for
    spending any time at school. Computers and robots will become so great part of our life that
    we will no longer have the need to educate ourselfs at schools.

    Teachers responsible for our education will be replaced by computer programs. Maybe we even won't
    have to learn anything. All desired data will be downloaded into our brains. Instead of learning new language
    for couple of months we will become fluent in it in a few seconds.

    The question is will we still be able to develop ourselfs? Will a software be able to stimulate our creativity like
    a good teacher is? These are the problems that people of the future will have to face. As for today let us better focus on learning, listening to our teachers and
    passing all necessary exams.
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    Default Re: [Article] Please check grammar and othe mistakes

    I have made a few corrections.

    Quote Originally Posted by tong-pu View Post
    How will a school of the future look like? Probably, every one of us, during some boring lecture,
    was wondering whether people of the future will also have to sit in the classes and listen to the teachers or not.

    As far as the development of technology is concerned, it seems that there will be no need for
    spending any time at school. Computers and robots will become a big part of our life, and
    we will no longer have the need to educate ourselves in schools.

    Teachers responsible for our education will be replaced by computer programs. Maybe we won't even
    have to learn anything. All desired data will be downloaded into our brains. Instead of learning new language
    for a couple of months, we will become fluent in it in a few seconds.

    The question is, "Will we still be able to develop ourselves? Will a software be able to stimulate our creativity as
    a good teacher does?"
    These are the problems that people of the future will have to face. As for today, let us better focus on learning, listening to our teachers and
    passing all the necessary exams.

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    Default Re: [Article] Please check grammar and othe mistakes

    WHAT will THE school of the future look like? Probably every one of us, during A boring lecture,
    HAs wONDERED whether people of the future will also have to sit in classes and listen TO teachers.
    DevelopINGt teChnology SUGGESTS that BEFORE LONG there will be no need TO spend any time IN school. Computers and robots will become SUCH IMPORTANT partS of our liVES that
    we will no longer need to educate ourselVEs IN schools.

    Teachers responsible for our education will be replaced by computer programs. PERHAPS we won't even
    have to FORMALLY learn anythinG BECAUSE all desired data will be downloaded to our brains. Instead of STUDYING A new language
    for A couple of months, we will become fluent in it in seconds.

    The question is, will we still be able to develop ourselVEs? Will software stimulate our creativity THE WAY a good teacher DOES? These are the problems people of the future will have to face. As for today, let us focus better on learninG BY listening to our teachers AND ABSORBING WHAT THEY SAY..
    GOOD LUCK!

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    Thanks a lot for help.

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