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Going back to school brings different kinds of new excitements especially if it is after a long break like summer vacation. Buying new stuff is one of the most exciting things to do before returning to school. It includes buying new clothes, back pack and all other school supplies. Next one is meeting class friends after a long break. When some of the old class friends end up going to a new class in a different section makes a little weird feeling. But it also gives an opportunity to meet some new class friends. Returning to school to start a new class means learning a lot of new materials with a new class teacher. Afterall going back to school is fun and very challenging thing to do.
 
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Going back to school [STRIKE]brings[/STRIKE]presents different kinds of new and exciting things, especially if it is after a long break like summer vacation. Buying new stuff is one of the most exciting things to do before returning to school. It includes buying new clothes,a back pack and [STRIKE]all[/STRIKE] other school supplies. Next, [STRIKE]one[/STRIKE] is meeting class friends after a long break. When some [STRIKE]of the [/STRIKE]old class friends end up going to a new class in a different section, it causes [STRIKE]makes[/STRIKE] a little weird feeling. But it also [STRIKE]gives [/STRIKE] provides an opportunity to meet some new [STRIKE]class[/STRIKE] friends. Returning to school to start a new class means learning a lot of new material[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] with a new [STRIKE]class[/STRIKE] teacher. Afterall, going back to school is fun and very challenging. [STRIKE]thing to do[/STRIKE]

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Returning to School​

Going back to school brings different kinds of new excitements especially if it is after a long break like summer vacation. Buying new stuff is one of the most exciting things to do before returning to school. It includes buying new clothes, back pack and all other school supplies. Next one [next what? I think I know what you mean, but I shouldn't have to guess] is meeting class friends after a long break. When some of the old class friends end up going to a new class in a different section [] makes a little weird feeling. [What makes a new feeling? You don't have a subject] But it also gives an opportunity to meet some new class friends. Returning to school to start a new class means learning a lot of new materials with a new class teacher. [STRIKE]Afterall[/STRIKE] [This isn't a word] going back to school is fun and very challenging thing to do.
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