Countries have believed in the necessity of cooperation in order to subsist, increase economic-social prosperity, and with the globalization trend, trading of goods, service and technology have increased and been liberalised among countries.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
Yes, this is.
They have believed that trading among countries is essentail to subsist economically.(Like export-import) And the globalization has made countries trade with each other for the goods, services and technologies not available within their own borders.
Why don't you write it in small sentences instead of making it a hotchpotch?
Last edited by varmaswathy81; 12-Apr-2011 at 17:47.
I never meant to criticize anybody, because I am also a person who love to learn English . I just expressed what I felt when I went through the sentence. I felt that, it will be more easy to grasp if he could use small sentences. Especially for ordinary readers like me. thats all.
Why would I think 'small' ?
You are mistaken friend.
I just meant you to write that in short sentences, instead of making it a mix of sentences. Then it will be easy to understand for ordinary readers who are not very proficient in language.
Anyway, I don't want to continue with this argument.
Last edited by varmaswathy81; 13-Apr-2011 at 16:06.
I think my suggested rewrite and your response are both clear.