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    Tan Elaine is offline Key Member
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    As Sammy was walking, he was looking at a car and heading towards a lamppost.

    Is the sentence natural? Could it be improved?

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    Default Re: Is the sentence natural?

    As Sammy was walking, he was looking at a car and heading towards a lamppost.
    Is the sentence natural? Could it be improved?


    Tan Elaine.
    There's nothing wrong with your sentence but one way it could be written is:

    "As Sammy walked along he was looking at a car, and heading for a lamppost".
    or "...., but heading for a lamppost".

    There are a lot of other possible versions.

    not a teacher

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