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    Nathan Mckane is offline Member
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    Hello dear teachers and friends!

    Would you please tell me what is wrong with those sentences?

    The shouts and roars of joy rose from people.

    He acted trecherously towards his friend.( He betrayed his friend.)

    God joined the hearts of John and Marry.( God made them love each other)

    Thanks in advance.

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    Default Re: acted trecherously

    You are asking us again to find the mistakes. It looks like homework, so you should try first.

    Rover

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    Default Re: acted trecherously

    No it is not a homework. Some of those are literal translations of persian texts. I was wondering if they sound natural to the native speakers of English.

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    Default Re: acted trecherously

    Quote Originally Posted by Nathan Mckane View Post
    Hello dear teachers and friends!

    Would you please tell me what is wrong with those sentences?

    Shouts and roars of joy rose from the people. OK.

    He acted treacherously towards his friend.( He betrayed his friend.) OK.

    God joined the hearts of John and Marry.( God made them love each other) OK.

    Thanks in advance.
    Bhai.

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