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    julia_band is offline Newbie
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    Parents are too permissive with their children

    New generation of parents became permissive because of global democratization of society and new style of life made permissive parenting modern. It is a problem for child-rearing. Why it became like that?

    • It is easier to say YES, than to explain why they say NO.
    • Childhood memories of non-permissive parenting make new parents to do the opposite.
    • Children feel free in the age of information. They have knowledge in different spheres of IT, fashion, languages and gadgets using.
    • Family as institution doesn’t have a meaning as it used to be, because parents are too busy with their problems instead of building social unit of the world.

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    JMurray is online now Key Member
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    julia band.
    I hope this is helpful.

    The global democratization of society and new ways of life have resulted in permissive parenting becoming the modern way. This is a problem for child-rearing. Why has it become like that?
    – It is easier to say YES, than to explain why they say NO.
    – Childhood memories of non-permissive parenting make new parents do the opposite.
    – Children feel free in the age of information. They have knowledge in different spheres of IT, fashion, languages and technology.
    The family as an institution doesn’t have the same meaning that it used to, because parents are too busy with their own problems instead of building a united society.

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