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    Please, check this sentence

    Please, check if the following sentence is grammatically correct. Thanks

    If this phenomenon gathers momentum, the leader will surrender and will leave for a remote and safer shelter, abandoning his tribe's mates, even if their chances of withstanding the rebels alone are low.

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    Re: Please, check this sentence

    It looks grammatical enough, but you need to find a better word than the informal mates in this kind of serious context.

    Rover

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    Re: Please, check this sentence

    What word would you suggest?

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    Re: Please, check this sentence

    Allies.

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