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    Red face correct my passage

    i have a paragraph of my own.please correct it.
    after a short sleep i woke up.then i went to toilet but could not sleep.i had been turning this side and that side as uncomfortable.any way somewhen i fell into a deep sleep.
    don't alugh at me please....if there is any mistake pls point out it.....

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    Default Re: correct my passage

    What about?

    After a short sleep, I woke up, went to the toilet, then back to bed again, but I couldn't fall/go back to sleep right away. I couldn't find a comfortable position; I tossed and turned, this way and that way, for what seemed like a very long time, but somehow managed to fall into a deep sleep, finally.

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