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    meela is offline Member
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    Miss Tania is bringing the certificate of Mr. Raj with her . Please inform me when you receive it. Other four bank drafts along with relevant letter will be sent to your relative today by DHL courier.

    as per your instruction the amounts have been disbursed to the following persons.

    1- Kia Rs. 1230000
    2- Rima Rs. 150,000

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    Quote Originally Posted by meela View Post
    Miss Tania is bringing the certificate of Mr. Raj with her . Please inform me when you receive it. Other four bank drafts along with relevant letter will be sent to your relative today by DHL courier.

    as per your instruction the amounts have been disbursed to the following persons.

    1- Kia Rs. 1230000
    2- Rima Rs. 150,000
    I am not an English teacher, but as a native speaker, this version sounds more natural to me:

    Miss Tania is bringing Mr. Raj's certificate with her. Please inform me when you receive it. Four other bank drafts along with their relevant letters will be sent to your relative today by DHL courier.

    As per your instructions, these amounts have been disbursed to the following persons:

    1. Kia Rs. 1,230,000
    2. Rima Rs 150,000

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